This blog is a record of my learning from Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ through to Tamaki College.
You really captured an exciting moment with your writing, Mary-Jane! I wonder if next time, you can use things like similes to add detail to your writing. Keep up the great work!
You really captured an exciting moment with your writing, Mary-Jane! I wonder if next time, you can use things like similes to add detail to your writing. Keep up the great work!
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